I’ve always said that grammar and I aren’t friends… I think that this image perfectly stands behind this statement. Here is a look at page one of the edits. When I opened the document I couldn’t help but laugh. The girl that did the edits, her name is Chrystal and she was wonderful. She taught me so much. I will forever be thankful. In the end she took out four thousand words and cleaned it up beautifully. For those of you who beta-read this manuscript, I am sooo sorry… LOL.